Script 3rd draft

Script 3rd draft



Establishing shot of the bell tower, camera zooms out, pans down to reveal the town. > Title



Start with Montage:



- Girl is walking on street. (show legs only walking to left). Cut to:



- Boy is walking on street. ( show legs only walking to right)



- Medium shot of the boy coming towards camera. He looks down. POV shot of the ring holding in his hands. Scene dissolve to:



- A four-leaf clover in the girl’s hands. Reverse shot of the girl’s face. Light coming in from right hand side ( car approaching her, squealing ). She turns her head a bit ( over exposure). Scene dissolve to white.

The four- leaf clover is flying across screen.



- Boy slowly appears from white screen, four- leaf clover flying across his face. Background slowly blends with real background.



- Boy looks around, POV shot of the bell tower. There is nobody there. He is feeling nervous and shy ( since he is going to propose). By the time he looks again, he sees the girl under the bell tower. (back view)



- The girl slowly turns back, camera zooms out to involve the boy behind her. They come to each other and hug. The boy puts the ring on the girl’s figure. However, the ring passes through her figure and drops on the ground.



- Boy is shocked and panic. He picks up the ring, then realises the girl is no longer there.



- Boy is looking for the girl everywhere. He sees a group of people further away. He runs towards them and sees the dead body of his girlfriend beside a car. He is devastated.



- Scene dissolves into the boy is standing on top of a building. He looks at the ring again and jumps down. ( down shot of the boy’s falling and tears floating in air)



- Camera( side view) falling with background panning. Camera rotates in a way as if the boy is standing up.



- Boy sees the girl running towards him. He is excited and about to hug her. However, the girl passes through his body( slow motion) as if she never sees him. He turns back and sees the girl is hugging another boy which is himself.



- Suddenly, the bell tower rings. He turns to the bell tower and realises they are under the bell tower again. He’ s body starts to disappear and dissolving into particles. Close up shot on his arm disappearing. After his hand disappeared, the ring drops. Scene dissolve into the ring is already on the girl’s figure.

-yu jia