Hi guys, pls take some time to look through the storyboard. any comments or suggestions pls let me know. and Bo, I showed Louise the first part of the girl, she said it works fine,she suggested to include the clover in panel 12, but I am not sure whether it will make the girl's face less prominent.
to yujia I think Lousise is right, it should have something in panel 12 to make sence its a reverse shot, something like the clover or hand. depend which point we want to highlight, the clover or her facial expression. or we can shifting camera focus in panel 12, from her facial to clover or converse. another suggestion is change panel 11's POV to a over shoulder shot, i think its also make sence.
Thank you for your suggestions. i want to show you guys the animatic tomorrow. Another thing is, i am wondering whether shot 51 is necessary and whether we need a full shot for the part where the guy jumping down from the building. Actually there was one, but i dont know why i did't put in.
Hi guys, pls take some time to look through the storyboard. any comments or suggestions pls let me know. and Bo, I showed Louise the first part of the girl, she said it works fine,she suggested to include the clover in panel 12, but I am not sure whether it will make the girl's face less prominent.
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ReplyDeleteI think Lousise is right, it should have something in panel 12 to make sence its a reverse shot, something like the clover or hand. depend which point we want to highlight, the clover or her facial expression. or we can shifting camera focus in panel 12, from her facial to clover or converse. another suggestion is change panel 11's POV to a over shoulder shot, i think its also make sence.
Thank you for your suggestions. i want to show you guys the animatic tomorrow. Another thing is, i am wondering whether shot 51 is necessary and whether we need a full shot for the part where the guy jumping down from the building. Actually there was one, but i dont know why i did't put in.
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